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Topic Started: Feb 9 2010, 02:22 PM (1,150 Views)
turtlecash
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A few of you may have seen this already back at VB Turquoise, it's my giant fan fic, World of Battle.

Here's a link to the story

And here's a link to the Character BIOs

This is a very long story, (as I'm posting this, I'm getting close to 200 pages, and I doubt I'm a tenth of the way through yet) I enjoy writing it though, so of course I'll keep chapters coming.

I hope you enjoy reading it, please comment, I'm happy to see any discussion because it encourages me to keep going and to do my best.
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EvaNibble
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I'm back.

i must say, i enjoyed that fic (especially the fact that its in the johto region...you copycat! :P kidding)

can't wait to see more, turtlecash.
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:hitmontop: Says: WoB Rocks

:skitty: Says: That is all there is to it.

:hitmontop: Says: See? End of discussion
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Alright, it's time for chapter 1-2 (Why did I choose this chapter system? It's even confusing me :P )

Glad to see you guys reading it, I'm happy that WoB is being enjoyed.

Character BIOs now include birthdays of all (human) characters, even though they aren't that important, or even mentioned for the most part in the story itself.
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It's been almost a week, so I've posted chapter 1-3.

Enjoy, even if you've already read it before, enjoy it anyways ^_^
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Cheatmaster
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The battles seem better...

:hitmontop: Says: 'couse they do, Turtle wrote 'em!
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turtlecash
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Really? I haven't changed much of it.

Well, I guess I have done some minor corrections since last time...

I spend a really long time doing edits, and in a story with long chapters like this one I can still find things to improve even months later and after many edits.

I'm one more part away from writing my 200th page, which would be the end of chapter 3-10.

That's far in the future in terms of what's been posted so far, but I'm really excited about it anyways.
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Well, since Chapter 1 is Autumn (And therefor, rainy) I can't wait for 2, which should be Winter? Ollie's gunna have his hands full. One of his Pokémon loves Hail and the other desperatly hates it!
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Yeah, Chapter 2 does start off with winter, and based on that patten you'd be correct if you assumed 3 was spring. Doesn't mean 4 is summer though (spring drags on for awhile because there are so many battles).

Since winter is essentially the harshest month though, I'm planning more focus on it in year 2 than year 1.

Ollie hasn't caught his second Pokemon yet based on my posting progress here though XD
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Neither has Ajay, Brent or Jenny.

But no spoilers. Because the HitmonCrew have been of fighting in the Underworld against Dark and Ghost types, so if Turtlecash attacks me for giving spoilers, I won't have any bodygaurds.

I want more reads!
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XD What's this? Are you saying that they're going to catch Pokemon? I had no idea :P

Well, I'm posting 1-4 now I suppose.

I'm having writer's block on how to deal with a battle in 3-10 right now, so much so that I actually skipped around it and just went on writing, hoping an idea would hit me. Nothing has. I might have to skip that battle, but I don't really want to, it goes against the story in that arc to do that.

Maybe I'll just make it a short battle, or start off halfway into it... I dunno...
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1-5 is up.

I'm still kinda stuck on 3-10... But it's really a matter of starting the battle. Once I get that good idea that kicks things off I'm sure I'll blaze through it.
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Don't you just hate Writer's Block? (Suffering from it aswell as Artist's Block) I have the opposite problem. I can open a fight, but then I realise I have no clue what to write next...
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Ahahaha! Got it!

I knew I'd get a good idea sooner or later ^_^ Now I've gotta finish up the 4 chapters and move on to the 5 ones.
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Ah, I just remembered to post another chapter, so 1-6 is up.

It's a hassle just to post these lately. I've got it posting in 6 places, and they're all being updated with WoB at the same rate, meaning when one gets a chapter, they all do. Because of that, just one chapter takes me awhile to get up.

As usual, I'm keeping character BIOs up to date too, and those are only available here, so keep enjoy WoB.

You guys are gonna need the character BIOs eventually too, trust me. By the early 3 chapters even I was beginning to forget who some characters were, and I made them! That's only a small fraction of the total amount that will be around by the end too, I've got them all memorized now since I'm the author, but the rest of you will be glad for the BIOs I assure you.
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Another chapter up as March Break comes to a close.

Honestly, this week is when I should have put up at least three new chapters, since I had the time to do so, but I completely forgot until today.
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There's been a few more chapters up since last month. We're at Chapter 1-10 now.

I think I'm worried that my posting is going to get ahead of my writing and posting less because of it... I should just hurry up and figure out how to build up to the end of the current arc that I'm writing though, since I've got a bunch of ideas for after that point.
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Ah...WoB. Havn't read it in a while.

Keep up the good work. And make sure Jenny gets to smash Brent with his own fists (until he cries like a Bonsly) at some point!
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Eventually...

For now Brent can suffer the pain of being a nearly nonexistent character. There are plenty of others more important than him.
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