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| Wigglytuff | Apr 8 2010, 04:09 PM Post #1 |
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I've finally come up with a new fan fiction! This one is to be very interesting, as there are several interesting characters, not really one main character. It is set in Kanto 2 Years after the events of GSCHGSS, and 5 years after the events of RBYGFRLG. In this story, archer is back and brought Team Rocket into Kanto. He has taken control of Saffron City and has many plans for Vermillion. Ariana, Proton, and Petrel are also back, along with a new, surprising face to the team: Blue! So, discuss, guess, and have fun in this topic! Enjoy my new story! |
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| turtlecash | Apr 8 2010, 05:19 PM Post #2 |
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Team Rocket as the main characters?... Cool. I wish I had thought of doing something like this, but oh well, too late for that. Good luck with writing this!
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| Wigglytuff | Apr 8 2010, 07:39 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks, I'm enjoying this! |
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| Wigglytuff | Apr 10 2010, 04:00 PM Post #4 |
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Guys, please do criticize me! |
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| Cheatmaster | Apr 15 2010, 01:00 AM Post #5 |
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That.....is one firin-mah-lazzarz kickass story which is awsome I like how Blue is eeeeeevvvvvvvvvvvvviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiillllllllllllllllllllllllllll Haha! Nice story, keep up the good writing |
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| LightKunai | Apr 15 2010, 01:38 PM Post #6 |
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A very good story! The only thing that kinda bothers me are the battle scenes with like the gym leaders. I would kinda expect them to be more detail, or more developed. All that seems to hapen is the GL pokemon attacks, then Blue's pokemon attacks, causing the other pokemon to fly back, crash into the person, and they get caught. |
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| Wigglytuff | Apr 21 2010, 01:08 PM Post #7 |
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He was always evil, within his soul. @LightKunai: Yeah, I got that same criticism from someone else. I'm working on description, and less dialogue. It is all talk, no play. xD |
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| Dusk | Apr 25 2010, 06:03 AM Post #8 |
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I think this story is really good! So good I'd like to make a little Tribute to it. Behold! Rocet Blue/Executive Blue! hope you like it!
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