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Topic Started: May 16 2010, 07:16 PM (708 Views)
turtlecash
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The story can be found through this link.

With the writing of World of Battle progressing pretty well, I decided I had some time to try and take a crack at something new (although by no means does this mean I'm halting WoB). I'm really looking forward to hearing what you guys think of this one since its the first story of mine staring a canon character.

So what's Squirtle about? Well, it's a alternate continuity of the anime. Basically, I'm trying my hand at writing what happens to Ash if he doesn't sleep in on the day of getting his first Pokemon.

Note that the split in continuity is not specifically the moment when Ash wakes up on time, It's far earlier than that. I haven't revealed that exact moment in the story yet, so I'm not gonna say much more on that for awhile.

Oh, and although I'm basing this on Gen 1 anime, I'm going to be including some future generational mechanics. In fact I believe I already mentioned Pokemon abilities in chapter 1 didn't I? Small details like that aside though, the Pokemon will be almost exclusively 1st generation since no more had been discovered when Ash began his journey.
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Dang right you're not halting WoB!

Anyways, this looks....meh-ish at the least, I'll have to wait till chapter 2 to see how good it is though
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